First Travelling Poetry Show
This is my first attempt at posting some poetry for the Travelling Poetry Show this week hosted by jillypoet.
The prompt was uncorked.....and somehow I ended up with this. Totally different than what I started out with.
started slowly
heading
d
o
w
n
h
i
l
l
fast
picking up s p e e d
the less hearty
jumping
others held tight
bumpingtwistingturningscreamingcrashing:
a few running
before the dust settled
and we start again.
The prompt was uncorked.....and somehow I ended up with this. Totally different than what I started out with.
started slowly
heading
d
o
w
n
h
i
l
l
fast
picking up s p e e d
the less hearty
jumping
others held tight
bumpingtwistingturningscreamingcrashing:
a few running
before the dust settled
and we start again.
posted by Jonna at 5:55 PM
4 Comments:
Glad you posted your poetry (your art is lovely to see, as well, particularly the birds!)
I like the action and movement in this. It calls to join in the play.
welcome!! it's so much fun to play with words and pacing like this and i always "forget" to do it. thanks for the good example/reminder!
I love poetry that is also art.
you multi tasker, you
This is GREAT I love the images evoked by your words!
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