Thursday, September 20, 2007

First Travelling Poetry Show

This is my first attempt at posting some poetry for the Travelling Poetry Show this week hosted by jillypoet.

The prompt was uncorked.....and somehow I ended up with this. Totally different than what I started out with.

started slowly

heading
d
o
w
n
h
i
l
l
fast

picking up s p e e d

the less hearty
jumping

others held tight

bumpingtwistingturningscreamingcrashing:

a few running
before the dust settled

and we start again.

4 Comments:

Blogger ...deb said...

Glad you posted your poetry (your art is lovely to see, as well, particularly the birds!)

I like the action and movement in this. It calls to join in the play.

9:32 PM  
Blogger polka dot witch said...

welcome!! it's so much fun to play with words and pacing like this and i always "forget" to do it. thanks for the good example/reminder!

7:52 AM  
Blogger wendy said...

I love poetry that is also art.

you multi tasker, you

8:47 AM  
Blogger Kristen Robinson said...

This is GREAT I love the images evoked by your words!

8:48 AM  

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